Disagreement

           Continuing from the first story, Tim said that children are more creative because they have no embarrassment to talk and they just happily show their masterpiece to whoever wants to look at it. After children become adults, they become more sensitive, lose that freedom, and start to become embarrass. I don’t really agree with this thought. Although most of the children don’t fear a judgement, they don’t know how to distinguish between the right and the wrong things to do. So, in my opinion, it depends on the person, everybody has different personality and capacity. We can’t say which one is more creative, what we can say is just who has the willingness to become more innovative.